Black Ghost

Yes, short, but conveyed good emotion. Good Overall. -Tony

Thanks for your comments! Myth: Thanks, I'll be sure to fix the typos you mentioned. And I know the reason for her being taken is unclear, but by the time ...

If you guys have a suggestion of people you want me to interview (fictionally) send me a PM.

Duh, Harry Potter! Hello, it has MAGIC IN IT. What more convincing do you people need? -Tony

A Boy and His Dragon Yeesh, it stinks in this forest. I was sitting on a small stump in a forest somewhere in Alagaësia. IT SMELLED. I have no idea ...

An Interview With a Princess I was sitting in Zelda's dining room inside Hyrule Castle, staring down at the dinner I was just served. I could only describe it as ...

Ok, for those of you who are confused about what's going on, there really isn't any coherent plot to this. It is really just a series of interviews of people ...

If it isn't your poem, maybe you should include the author's name?

I agree, this is a very sloppy writing. Also, try not to post four poems at once. Instead, post one that has been revised. -Tony

Rosethorn, I really like the new ending. And the piece is a lot more better now that you've edited it. I hope you post more of it soon! :D -Tony

Not bad, just take off the exclamation marks in the las two sentences. It makes the end have less effect.

This isn't the end, and anyone who wants to know more about the character Max should read the previous chapters. (they are on the site)

I thought is was a very meaningful poem. I can definetly feel what your trying to say. Nice poem!

I don't know much about critting poetry, but I just wanted to say I liked this, especially the last stanza.

Thanks for your comments, I'm glad you enjoyed it.